Hello, fellas. To prepare for IELTS Writing Task 1, you do not only need to practice writing based on data, but also diagrams describing how a process occurs. Here is the outline of the task.
(Taken from https://essayforum.com/writing/honey-bees-life-cycle-57460/)
Like the other types of IELTS Writing Task 1, the first paragraph constitutes an introduction. It comprises of the paraphrase of the questions and an overview.
a. Paraphrase of the questions
The first sentence tells what the diagram is all about. It can be made by paraphrasing the questions. For example, the question above can be changed into:
“The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee” (More on paraphrasing: https://englishtips4u.com/2018/05/24/engtips-paraphrasing/).
The overview states at least the number of stages. You can also add information on the duration of the process and how it starts and ends.
e.g. There are five stages in the development of the honey bee, from an egg to a mature adult insect. The life cycle takes between 34 and 36 days to complete.
2) Body Paragraphs
Body paragraphs are where the steps are described. Break the description into two paragraphs to make it more organised. Do not forget to include the initial and final steps mentioned in the overview, but describe them in more detail or in a different way.
The life cycle of the honey bee starts when the female adult lays an egg. It typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage, the nymph grows in size and shed its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again other 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days, it reaches full maturity.
Sequence Words and Phrases
To show the order of a process, sequence words and phrases can be used.
• The First Stage
In the first stage,
At/In the beginning
,The first stage is when…
The process begins/starts/commences when…
The process begins with + <noun/noun phrase>
• Middle Stages
In the following stage,
In the stage after/following this,
In the stage that follows,
• The Last Stage
The last/final stage is when…
The process ends when…
The process ends with + <noun/noun phrase>
Ebrahim Tahasoni, Master IELTS Visuals (Academic Writing Task One): Course Materials & Supplements for Academic Candidates
Ielts-simon.com, IELTS Writing Task 1: life cycle essay, http://ielts-simon.com/ielts-help-and-english-pr/2013/01/ielts-writing-task-1-life-cycle-essay.html
Lin Lougheed, Barron’s Writing for the IELTS
Alireza Ramedani, IELTS Writing Compact: GRAPH REVIEW (Academic Task 1)
Compiled and written by @fathrahman for @englishtipsforyou on Tuesday, July 3, 2018